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Short Story: The Weaver and the Businessman

Traditional loom work by a woman in Konya, Turkey

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The old woman continued her weaving.  Her slender, gnarled fingers deftly moved along the loom, positioning threads and locking them in place.  She studied her handiwork for several seconds before speaking to the younger man who stood behind her.  “What’s on your mind, Jeffrey?”

“You make the most beautiful tapestries, Grandmother.”

“Thank you.  I’ve had many years to practice.”

“And yet, it takes you so long to finish a single one.”

The woman frowned and her hand paused in its work.  “Good craftsmanship takes time and patience, Dear.”

“Perhaps.  But there are machines that would allow you to work faster, Grandmother.”

“And those machines would rob me of the joy I find in my work.  Working faster would be a poor substitute for the care and love I put into each tapestry.”

“But working faster would mean having more tapestries to sell.”

The woman sighed and turned to face the forty year old man.  She noted that he was still in the dress pants and shirt that his job required, though he had taken off the tie and jacket.  “And that would mean more money.”  She smiled as his pale face flushed at her words.  “Yes, I thought you might be coming to that.  It usually does with you.”

“Grandmother-“

“No, Jeffrey,” she said in a soft, firm tone.  “Listen to your old grandmother.  You are a good man.  You’re smart, and your business sense has provided much for our family.  For that, I am proud of you.

“But sometimes you seem to only think in terms of money.  And for that, I feel sorry for you.  Because some things are more important than money.  And my weaving is one of those things.

“You’re right.  I could buy machines that could help me produce a single tapestry in a few days, rather than the weeks it now takes me.  And if I was doing this for the money, it would make perfect sense to do exactly that.

“But I don’t do this for the money.  I have money enough as it is – as hard as it may be for you to believe that.  Instead, I weave for the love of weaving.

“When I weave, I create something beautiful, as you already noted.  I create it thread by thread and row by row.  Each move I make is an act of love and creation, a chance to pour another ounce of my soul into each tapestry.  That’s something I cherish.  It’s something that the money from a thousand machine-produced tapestries could never buy.  And I’m not willing to give that up just to collect money I don’t need.  It’s too high a price to pay.”

“But what of the things you could buy?  Things that would make your life easier?  More comfortable?”

“An easy life is overrated, as are excess comforts.  I have comforts enough.  Any more would make me value my life less, I imagine.”

“Are you saying I have it too easy, then?”

“That’s not for me to say, Dear.  I’m merely saying what’s right for me.  You’ll have to decide what’s right for you.”

“Oh.”

The woman paused a moment.  “I do admit that I worry about you at times, though.”

“You do?”

“Yes.  I sometimes wonder if you’ve lost sight of why you became a businessman.”

“What do you mean?”

“I remember when you first went off to college.  Yo were so excited to learn about business management.  The first time you came home, you talked incessantly about your classes.  I didn’t understand most of what you said, but I loved your passion and excitement.

“You took that passion and excitement into your first job, too.  You spoke of the challenges you faced enthusiastically.  You loved the problems and puzzles you solved.  Back then, it was about the adventure.

“But at some point, it seemed like you began focusing on the money.  And the passion changed.  Some days, I wonder if it’s there at all.”

“I see.”  The man sat down heavily.

“Do you, Dear?  Don’t misunderstand me.  Money’s not bad.  And you’ve always made a lot of money doing what you do, which is right.  But before, you thought of the money as a side effect of doing something you loved.  And now, it seems as though the money is your main motivation – maybe even your only motivation.  And that change seems to have stolen something from you.”

The pair sat in silence for a few moments.  Finally, Jeffrey spoke.  “I think I need to ponder this some more.”

“I hope you do, Dear.  I’d really like to see that fire in your eyes again when you talk about your latest venture or investment.  It’s a wonderful sight.”

“It’s a wonderful feeling, too.  I think I’d forgotten that.”  He walked to the door, then paused.  “Grandmother?”

“The old woman looked up from the weaving she had returned to.  “Yes, Dear?”

“How did you ever get so wise?”

“Years of living and learning.”  She paused, then added, “And weaving.”

“Weaving?”

“Yes, Dear.  When you pend this much time in front of a loom, you have plenty of time to think.”

He chuckled as he left the room.

Mary Sue gets me thinking

Recent conversations over at Slacktivist have increased my interest in writing again.  Hopefully this will lead to some actual writing in the near future.

The main conversation that has gotten me thinking was the discussion about Mary Sue‘s taking place in the comments section of Fred’s latest Left Behind post.  Wikipedia defines a Mary Sue thusly:

A Mary Sue (sometimes just Sue), in literary criticism and particularly in fanfiction, is a fictional character with overly idealized and hackneyed mannerisms, lacking noteworthy flaws, and primarily functioning as wish-fulfillment fantasies for their authors or readers.

The discussion of Mary Sue’s made me wonder about my own writing and my own characters.  I began to wonder if I have been creating any Mary Sue’s.  So I ran three of my characters through the Universal Mary Sue Litmus Test.  All three came out with a score that fell in the “most likely Not-Sue” category, though they were all on the high end of that range.  And a separate litmus test did suggest that Berit may be shading into “Borderline Mary Sue” territory.  This is a fair assessment, I think.  As such, I’ll be watching her character and how she affects the story somewhat carefully.

I think that what gets me about Mary Sues is that one of the seemingly primary traits is their ridiculous degree of perfection and capability.  Cactus Wren offers a powerful example of this trait when she describes a Mary Sue from a particular Harry Potter fan fiction author:

Callmebuck always reminds me of a particular Pottersue, a fifteen-year-old transfer student from America who was impossibly beautiful, slender yet curvy, had an IQ of 520 and ten given names, and besides being a more talented witch than Hermione was a brilliant actress and singer and stage director and filmmaker and was friends with all the characters from CardCaptor Sakura. (Who just happened to also be studying at Hogwarts.) And she was rich (her family had “estates” in about eight countries) and fluent in a dozen languages. Whenever anyone pointed out that this character was just too perfect to be tolerable, that she needed some flaws to keep the rest of the cast from killing her, the writer wailed, “But I can’t think of anyyyyy!”

Now personally, I can’t imagine writing such a Mary Sue, at least not that one extreme.  None of my characters are masters of every trade out there.  Nor can I picture them being so perfect.  I like my characters to be more human than that.  After all relatively ordinary human beings are what I find most interesting, personally.

Of course, reading through the litmus tests, I do find myself wondering if I’m not in danger of writing my characters as all being too likable and too agreeable.  After all, a story needs conflict, and personality clashes offer a great source of conflict.  So maybe I need to think a bit more about actually showing the conflict between Berit and Brother Jens that I’ve imagined all along.  Perhaps I need to work on those grating personality traits.  And of course, I need to working on having characters respond appropriately when those traits manifest.

It gives me a few things to think about.  And all this thinking is creating a desire to do some writing.  Now that’s a bonus.

On Beauty

Be still. Know beauty. Let it flow from the depths of your soul. For that is its source. Let it flow through you into the rest of the world. Let it flow and watch as it is reflected back at you.

This is the nature of beauty. It is perceived and projected. it can only be seen by those who allow it to come from themselves. There is as much beauty in the word as you put into it.

Those who say beauty is transitory are wrong. Beauty is eternal, for it is an essence that flows into and through the cosmos. What is transitory is your own willingness to see it.

Lukas and the Dragon

Just a bit of short fiction for a change in pace.

The crescent moon rode high in the sky as Lukas approached the old cemetery. He softly padded through the grass, carrying a shovel over his left shoulder. He avoided the stone path, not wanting to make the slightest sound. One of his sources told him that this graveyard still had a caretaker on duty at night. All accounts indicated that the man who filled the job was old and probably would never see or hear the grave robber. But Lukas wanted to take no chances.

Once he made his way past the first row of tombstones, Lukas began to wave among the markers, bending near the more worn ones to read them. He had compiled a list of names of wealthy people who had been buried here between two and three centuries ago. He knew that graves dug for members of those family at that time held the most promise for obtainable booty.

After ten minutes, the grave robber smiled at the tombstone he had just read. It bore the name Anselm, a name that was high on his list. He took a step back, put the blade of his shovel to the ground a few feet from the headstone, and stepped on it to drive the shovel into the dirt. He then pried the shovel and dirt from the ground.

He was about to repeat this process when he heard a low, gravelly voice behind him. ?I do hope that you are digging your own grave. It will save others the trouble of doing it for you.? Lukas spun around to confront the undertaker, only to receive the shock of his life. He stood frozen, his mouth slightly ajar as he stared into the crimson eyes of a dragon.

The creature?s scales were black with a slight sheen. The dragon?s hide seemed to blend into the blackness of night, only betrayed by the moonlight glinting off it. After a few seconds of shock, the wyrm spoke again, ?Well? What do you have to say for yourself??

At that, Lukas took several scurrying steps backwards, falling over the tombstone in the process. Both he and his shovel fell to the ground, each making a soft thudding sound. ?Be careful, you fool!? the dragon hissed. ?You almost broke the oldest marker in this cemetery.?

Lukas finally found his voice, though it was strained and tenuous. ?W-what are you??

?I should think that is obvious.?

?What do you want??

?At the moment, I want to know why you?re seeking to disturb my treasures.?

?Your treasures?? Lukas asked. His brain wheeled in fright and confusion.?

?Yes, my treasures. This graveyard is their home. Not all dragons hoard their treasures in caves, no matter what the story books say.?

?I?see?Are you going to kill me, now??

?The thought has crossed my mind. I don?t take kindly to grave robbers.?

?Please don?t!?

The dragon sniffed derisively. Lukas watched as a small stream of smoke escaped each nostril. ?I don?t see why I shouldn?t. You were trespassing. You invaded my home. An you were about to disturb my treasures.?

?I didn?t know it was your home!?

?I don?t see why that should matter. You were still someplace you do not belong attempting to take something you have no right to.?

?I?m sorry.?

?You?re sorry you were caught. And you?re sorry that the consequences of being caught may be dire. But you?re not sorry for doing wrong.?

?Please! I beg you!? Lukas cried, more terrified.

The beast sighed. ?Oh, very well. I will spare you this time. But do not return, or I shall devour you without a second thought!?

?Yes! Yes! I promise I will never return! I?ll never rob another grave!?

The dragon snorted. ?I should hope not! Now be gone!?

Lukas leaped up and ran towards his home, never looking back.

Another figure stepped from the shadows as the grave robber fled. The dragon spoke, not turning to greet this new presence. ?And how long have you been watching.?

?I arrived just in time to hear you scold the young man for tripping over the tombstone. By the way, you surely realize that it?s not the oldest tombstone here.?

?Of course I know! But for some reason, that statement always puts them more on edge.?

?Ah, then the dramatics of terror outweigh accuracy.?

?Only when it comes to protecting my treasures.?

?You realize he?ll tell everyone in town about meeting you, right?? The old man asked after a moment?s pause.

?Yes.?

?And you realize that some will come out here some night to check it out for themselves??

?They usually do.?

?I didn?t think you liked nosy people any more than you liked grave robbers.?

?I don?t. But at least they?re less of a disturbance. Besides, I felt I needed to make my point as strongly as possible with this one.?

?Fair enough.? The caretaker paused. ?Of course, you also realize that he probably now thinks there?s even more gold and jewelry here than he had first imagined, right??

?So you figure he assumed I consider such trinkets my treasures??

?Well, that would be in line with the story books.?

The dragon sniffed at that. ?You humans are so foolish. Well, if he thinks such nonsense, then so be it.?

The caretaker chuckled. ?Yes, I suppose so. But it?s late and I?m tired. So I?ll leave you to your horde of souls and the collective wisdom entombed here.?

?Very well, old friend. Good night.?

?Good night to you, as well.? With that, the old man began the walk to his home on the far side of the cemetery. The dragon watched him for a few moments before fading away.

A great how-not-to book.

Yesterday, I bought a copy of How NOT to Write a Novel and began reading it. I learned about the book reading the comments over at Slacktivist, and the title (not to mention the part Fred’s commentor quoted) just called to me.

The book is written by a couple of people in the publishing industry. They decided that rather than writing another book filled with hit-or-miss techniques for writing a great novel, they’d describe the numerous mistakes that fledgeling authors make, mistakes which guarantee their manuscript will find the shortest path to the recycling bin.

So far, I’ve finished the three chapters having to do with common plot mistakes. I’m pleased to report that I’ve so far managed to avoid most of those in Harald’s Story. However, the one section did give me reason to reconsider an early scene in the story. I don’t plan on removing or editing it yet, as I think I can justify the scene and it’s not that bad — at least not in my opinion. But when I finish the first draft, I’ll go back and look at it as part of the editorial process.

The book itself is rather humorous. I think the examples of bad writing they provide are even funnier. A lot of them involve some sort of fusion between ergonomics and hydraulics, which is just plain weird. I’m starting to wonder if they’ve chosen to weirdness of the plot device to further emphasize the bad writing they’re trying to draw potential writers’ attentions to. Or perhaps they created such a totally bizarre subject to avoid hurting anyone’s feelings by choosing something that might resemble a potential reader’s own poor attempts at writing.

I’ve been writing a lot of posts about the writing I’ve been doing. I think I may be getting obssessed. I’m not sure that’s a bad thing, though.

Reflections of an Author

Tonight, I wrote the next installment of Harald’s Story. If I did everything correctly, it should automatically show up on WOTL tomorrow. At this juncture, I thought it appropriate to offer some of my own musings on this story, and possibly on writing in general.

The section I wrote tonight contains a couple events of significance. The first event is the departure of Father Delling from the tale. Strangely, his passage into the shadows is rather understated, given how fond I and some of my readers have become of him. There’s no fanfare or grand speeches. In fact, the goodbyes themselves are not recorded because they are observed from a distance. And yet, this seems appropriate for the old monk. I do not know if he will return. I have played with the possibility that he might make a brief appearance as the story wraps itself up. But even that is merely a possibility.

The other event of significance is not about plot, but the storytelling itself. I have added a new point of view to the narration. This new section is told from the point of view of Captain Soren. To be honest, this both surprises me an troubles me. When I introduced his character, I had no intention of telling his point of view. And yet, tonight’s work made it clear that it was appropriate to do so.

This troubles me because I find myself wondering if Soren, a character I introduced to play a relatively small part, might have just taken on a bigger role than I had planned. I grant you that he would not be the first character in the story to do so. Both Berit (who I planned to deny even a name beyond “Girl” when I first imagined her) and Brother Jens were originally introduced as small actors meant to merely push the plot along, and somehow managed to insert themselves into the heart of the tale against my own plans.

Alas, I am a poor author at the mercy of his characters! I fear they may next demand that I include their names be added to the author line. Or perhaps one of them will make mention of their cut of any royalties. It’s an amusing thought, though I’m not sure how amusing it really is.

I think the next installment I write will likely be told from Jens’s point of view. I’m a bit concerned by that possibility, as I’m not sure I can catch his inner voice correctly. Point of view can be tricky like that, and Jens is possibly the character whose point of view is most difficult for me. I’m not sure whether that’s due to how unfamiliar his mindset has become to me or how familiar it used to be.

I’m reminded of a friend of mine, whom I shall call Trish. Six or seven years ago, she tried her hand at writing. For her, writing was one of the ways for her to try to process through her own confusion and resentment toward her funamentalist Christian background. Her main villain was a domineering woman who embodied everything she despised about those from Trish’s background that had hurt her. To put it mildly, this villain was a caricature of pure evil. And unless you’re trying to write a fairy tale, such caricature’s don’t really work that well. Fortunately, Trish was trying to write a fairy tale.

Unfortunately for Trish, she tried to write a few chapters from her villains point of view. I can honestly say that those chapters did not work at all. A narrator who oozes that much evil is simply unbelievable, even in a fairy tale. Under such circumstances, you have to make the person’s point of view seem at least someone reasonable, even if it’s ultimately objectionable.

I sincerely hope that my efforts to relay Brother Jens’s point of view is more realistic than Trish’s portrayal of the inner workings of her villain’s mind. But I still worry that I’ll be able to do it justice. Hopefully Brother Jens himself will step up and guide me through the process, as so many of the others have already done.

Cross-pollination

I think that it’s safe to say that my question and answer exercise has wound down. It was a fun exercise, and I’m almost sad to see that it’s already over. However, I’m hoping to try it again someday, perhaps in three to six months.

I actually did this exercise on three different blogs or diaries and got different questions and answers at each site. I decided that it might be fun to post a link to each of the resulting entries. So below, you will find a complete list, organized according to the blog or diary they appeared on.

The Musings of a Confused Man
Speak not of such things for the frighten me!
A rose by any other name?
The things kids discuss during class! (Content is somewhat mature.)
Spiritual Sexuality and Sexy Spirituality

Passions and Reflections
My biggest purchase
Sounding off about a clapping hand
How embarrassing!
As if I need any more changes!
Driving down the polytheism highway
Engendering differences
God-bothering etiquette
Okay, so some might think me a morbid god

Jarred’s Slice of Heaven
Plus it strikes me as a REAL mockery of marriage
Start spreading the news…
Happy bundle of sticks

Advice to those who redistribute blog posts

While checking out my site stats this morning, I discovered that someone found me by following a link from a site I’d never heard of before. As I’m always fascinated to find someone new who is linking to me, I went to check out the page that linked to me. After reading the first paragraph, it quickly became obvious to me that the author of the other blog had decided to repost my “panacea” post from March 2007.

Now, I’ll admit that I’m always delighted when someone finds value in something I wrote and wants to share it with other people. In many ways, it’s a great honor to discover that someone redistributed an entire post that I wrote. Granted, I’d be even more pleased if they linked back to my original post (this particular blogger linked back to my blog, which I appreciate), and then only quoted portions of my work on their site with their own commentary. After all, it’d be nice to know why they found my writings so valuable and added their own ideas to the mix. It’s that whole creative feedback process. But not everyone does that, and I understand. And perhaps there are those cases where reprinting the entire post makes sense, especially if the site doing the reprinting is a repository of articles on a similar theme.

One thing about such occurrences does bother me, however. That’s the fact that the the people who occasionally reprint my posts don’t contact me before doing so. As a rule, doing so is considered good manners and possibly even an ethical imperative. It might seem strange to some people, but there are some good reasons why you should always contact someone before reprinting something they’ve written (or even quoting parts of it):

1. It allows authors to track the impact their writing has.
Simply put, as a writer, I like to know what kind of audience my writing is getting. So if someone picks up one of my posts and says, “Hey this is so good, I want to share it with others,” I want to know about it! And if they repost it online, I want to be able to follow it there and see what kinds of responses it gets. Again, this goes back to that whole concept of feedback being part of the creative process.

2. It helps authors preserve their intellectual property rights.
Even bloggers have a right to “own” what they write, and it’s important that others respect those IP rights. Now, I personally tend to be rather generous about this sort of thing. It’s unlikely that I would ever deny someone the opportunity to quote or reprint something I wrote on my blog. I’d just ask them to acknowledge me as the author and link back to my blog (or otherwise give their readers a way to contact me). However, there are other bloggers who may feel differently. In fact, I remember a blogger who ran into a bit of a situation not too long ago. This particular blogger happens to be a freelance writer. A print newspaper picked up one of her posts and decided to print it in one of their issues. The problem with this is that this blogger had already planned on rewriting this particular post into an article that she planned to submit to various publications. The fact that the paper snatched up her blog post without talking to her created issues for her ability to modify and sell her own work. Fortunately, the paper who printed her post without permission was more than happy to compensate her for their error. But the point is, it’s important that you talk to someone before redistributing something they wrote to make sure you don’t create such problems for them.

3. It gives authors the opportunity to revise their work.
As much as I’d like to keep up this image of being this fantastic writer, I have to admit that some of my blog posts are not as well polished as they could be. This has led to one memorable occasion when I winced to find something I threw together somewhat quickly tucked into a repository of articles on another site. As I read it, I began to notice a number weaknesses in the post. Had the individual asked me for permission to include that particular post in their collection, I almost certainly would’ve offered to do a major rewrite first so that they would have a far better article to reprint.

Quite a surprise

Today, I dcedided to play around with the information that Xinu Returns provided about my blog. I discovered that some search engines reported a link to my blog from this page. So naturally I decided to check it out. Imagine my surprise when I discovered it was a cut and paste of my blog entry about ritual nudity. (I reread that entry and still love it, by the way.)

I have to admit that I’m rather flattered that someone found something I wrote so worthwhile that they put it up on their site. It’s nice to get that kind of compliment. Of course, I also would’ve liked it if they had contacted me to ask permission. I would’ve gladly granted it to them. (Though I might’ve offered to polish the rough edges first, as I was writing informally for my blog rather than working on what I would consider a high quality article meant for publication).

And of course, I would’ve also told them how I’d like to be credited for it. Currently, the page gives no authorship information, though I will note they graciously included a link back to my original blog post. I’m thinking about contacting the site and asking them to add a note of authorship to the page.

The only other thing that bothers me is that it’s posted under the category of “Traditional Craft.” While I can certainly understand why they put it in that category, it does leave me concerned that someone might get the wrong idea — namely that I’m claiming to be a Traditional Witch of any kind. (At this time I’m not.) And I hate even implying (or having others imply on my behalf) that my occasional musings on such topics are in any sense authoritative. Because to be honest, they’re not. So I may also ask about having some sort of disclaimer added in addition to my name.

Day in Review

I lost my cell phone this morning. When I got to the customer site, I went to take it off my belt, only to find the belt clip was empty. I couldn’t do anything about it, so I prayed that I somehow left it at home (not really a possibility, given the belt clip was with me) and went in to work. After work, I decided to run right home to check. My neighbor came out the front door as I got out of my car. It turns out that I had lucked out. Apparently, I knocked the silly thing off while dusting the snow off my car this morning. My neighbor had come home at lunch and found it. So I thanked him profusely and hopped back into my car to head for Equal Grounds.

I almost went to Jitters here in Henrietta instead. As of yesterday, the POC started having our weekly Meet and Greets there, and I found it an incredibly enjoyable place. However, I decided I wanted the slightly more cozy atmosphere of my old haunt, so I made the drive to the South Wedge. While there, I wrote some erotica and the next chapter of Journey.

While there, a couple other patrons watched Hide and Seek. I glanced up from time to time to watch the giant screen (it was less than four feet from me) for a few seconds, but I mainly focused on the writing. From what I saw, it was a pretty bizarre movie, and I never expected the ending.

The new chapter in Journey is about my longest relationship. It was a strange one to write. I’m finding that as the events I’m writing about get closer and closer to the modern day, it’s a little harder to write. Of course, part of that is because the issues Ihave to write about are things I’m still working on in some sense. This became apparent as I wrote the last few paragraphs of this chapter. I realized that the end of that relationship was about realizing what I deserved and demanding it. That’s something I’m still working on right now, and the need to continue insisting on the kind of love, affection, and attention I both want and deserve is a lesson that’s getting driven home right now.